More musings on writing

[hils]

danceswithgary has written a lovely commentary on Shall Not Fade.

This, to me, further highlights the comments I made here about my thoughts on my writing.

I spent weeks angsting over Shall Not Fade and I still wasn't happy with it when I decided to bite the bullet and post it. Yet again it was one of those instances where I felt it needed improving but didn't know why or how

The commentary Val has done really illustrates that I shouldn't listen to myself. LOL. As I said in the comments, for the first time it made me proud of something I've written.