I'll say one thing about Fracture

[hils]

I wrote my snippet this afternoon and it's the first time I felt properly good about writing this year. The plot took a totally different direction to what I had planned when I started but that, to me, is a good thing. It means the characters are doing what they want instead of what I want

Maybe I'll attempt to tackle the mpreg tomorrow. I know I said I was going to let it go but it's bugging me! LOL!

Comments

[ladydreamer.livejournal.com]

Yay mpreg!

(I'm like a dealer. I like to recruit.)

I often feel like the characters in SV don't come off as moving genuinely because they don't let the characters develop organically. They have to hold them back to stretch out the plot, and they refuse to explore things deeply because if they did, then people would wonder (more) why character X doesn't do this or that.

[hils.livejournal.com]

I think that's just poor writing on the show. Plenty of other shows I've watched where it's never been an issue

[ladydreamer.livejournal.com]

Oh, I agree that it's poor writing -_-;;