spikewriter someone must have heard me talking about constructive criticsm in response to your post
I sent my VigBean fic to
muck_a_luck for beta and blimey, I've never seen so much red in all my life. I don't think anyone has attacked my work so brutally before, all in a good way with suggestions offered etc. It was a bit of a sting, but a good one. Now I need to set about fixing it and hopefully with a better written piece of work as an end result