On bended knee

[hils]

No one has responded over at merlin_betas yet and since I don't know what the average response time is I thought I'd ask on here too

I should point out that it probably isn't as scarily bad as I previously made it out to be

Title: Doesn't have one yet. Title is the last thing I do
Genre: Drama mostly and hurt/comfort
Pairing, or characters: Merlin/Arthur but nothing beyond a couple of kisses. Also has Uther, Gaius, Gwen, Morgana and Hunith as background characters.
Type of beta you'd like:Ok, I need someone to rip this one to shreds for me. It started off as a ficlet and somehow ran away and is now the longest Merlin fic I have written. As well as the usual grammar check (I have comma issues) I need someone to pull apart the characterisation and plot as I am worried I've lost my way with it a bit
Length, or word count: 5700 words
Language (if other than English):
Short Summary: It's a companion piece to go with this art