hils: (Lex slasher by me)
hils ([personal profile] hils) wrote2008-02-17 01:07 am

I'll say one thing about Fracture

I wrote my snippet this afternoon and it's the first time I felt properly good about writing this year. The plot took a totally different direction to what I had planned when I started but that, to me, is a good thing. It means the characters are doing what they want instead of what I want

Maybe I'll attempt to tackle the mpreg tomorrow. I know I said I was going to let it go but it's bugging me! LOL!

[identity profile] beach-baby3000.livejournal.com 2008-02-17 01:19 am (UTC)(link)
What is Fracture?

[identity profile] hils.livejournal.com 2008-02-17 01:23 am (UTC)(link)
The latest episode of Smallville

[identity profile] beach-baby3000.livejournal.com 2008-02-17 01:29 am (UTC)(link)
OH! i don't watch Smallville. The last time i did it was on ABC family and it was at the beginning of the series. I didn't think they did any new episodes.

[identity profile] hils.livejournal.com 2008-02-17 01:32 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah, it's still struggling along. LOL

[identity profile] hils.livejournal.com 2008-02-17 01:31 am (UTC)(link)
Well, I'll see what Val thinks first ;)

[identity profile] selinamoonfire.livejournal.com 2008-02-17 01:34 am (UTC)(link)
You wrote something, so congrats are in order. :P

[identity profile] hils.livejournal.com 2008-02-17 01:39 am (UTC)(link)
Hehe! Only if it's good.

[identity profile] ladydreamer.livejournal.com 2008-02-17 02:32 am (UTC)(link)
Yay mpreg!

(I'm like a dealer. I like to recruit.)

I often feel like the characters in SV don't come off as moving genuinely because they don't let the characters develop organically. They have to hold them back to stretch out the plot, and they refuse to explore things deeply because if they did, then people would wonder (more) why character X doesn't do this or that.

[identity profile] hils.livejournal.com 2008-02-17 02:37 am (UTC)(link)
I think that's just poor writing on the show. Plenty of other shows I've watched where it's never been an issue

[identity profile] ladydreamer.livejournal.com 2008-02-17 03:22 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, I agree that it's poor writing -_-;;
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[personal profile] danceswithgary 2008-02-17 03:03 am (UTC)(link)
Snippet just sent back. :-D It's fine, but I raised some discussion points.

[identity profile] hils.livejournal.com 2008-02-17 03:05 am (UTC)(link)
Got it! Replied! It went into my spam folder again. What the hell!

(Anonymous) 2008-02-17 03:19 am (UTC)(link)
OK, sent the right file this time. Sorry.

[identity profile] hils.livejournal.com 2008-02-17 03:21 am (UTC)(link)
No worries! Thanks!